Reflections on Abstract Sound October 6

Today in class, Kiera, Naomi, and Alexis all critiqued my abstract sound piece. Their comments offered helpful suggestions about my piece as a whole. From their comments I found that I can further my piece by creating another pause in the piece or by making the one pause already in the piece more dramatic. It is helpful to receive feedback and play with their suggestions. I also received a lot of positive feedback. By looking at the negative aspect of the feedback, I can further my work in a different way. I heard sounds in Kiera's, Alexis's, and Naomi's work that I really liked. I would like to incorporate some of their techniques into my piece. Other people's comments are really helpful in the further development of a piece.